Please release me…

I read a lot of press
releases.  I also write a fair number of them.  Most of the ones I read – the
ones I didn’t write, at least – lead me to wonder what the purpose of the
exercise was.

Dateline: Anywhere, USA, Today
XYZ, Inc. is pleased to
announce the appointment of Fred Smith as (insert C or VP level title here). 
Mr. Smith joins the XYZ team after (insert career track here), and is looking
forward to…blah, blah, blah.

This is, of course, great news for Fred,
and for XYZ, Inc.  If it isn’t, XYZ, Inc. is in deep kimchee.  But why would
anyone outside of XYZ, Inc. care, based on the information in the press

Journalism 101 centers around the "Five Ws" – Who, What, When,
Where, Why.  Answer all those questions, and you’re a news item,


You do need to cover the five Ws.  You also need to
answer the question, "Who cares?"  That will answer another important question,
"What’s my lead?"  You want to get the reader’s attention with your first
sentence, to spark interest in the story you have to tell.  That’s your lead,
your hook.  Just trumpeting the fact that Fred Smith has joined the team isn’t a
hook.  But if Fred just joined XYZ after driving revenues up 150% in two years
at ABC,  Ltd., that’s a hook – and should be the lead on the press

Another important thing about press releases is…don’t just
send them to the press.  Post them online at,,, Yahoo and Google News, industry association websites, and any
other web portal that your customers visit.

When you write a press
release, write it as if you’re telling the story to that big customer you want
to attract.  If you do, you’ll get press coverage and market impact.  When you
distribute it, send it to the marketplace – the web – as well as your media
list.  This approach will get you press coverage, and it will also make your
company’s news visible to search engines – and your customers.


One response to “Please release me…

  1. Great idea – also a good idea for writing a blurb that grabs people – read a theatre biography – trust me of all walks of life THEATRE will lead the way to POWerful blurb writing..

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